I Died For Love Comments
in a park i do dwell
i met a guy i love so well
there he took me heart from me
now he wants to set it free
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This is dramatic but not too burdened with it. As a rhymer, I can't resist the temptation to suggest two additional words be added at the end. 'Once more.' GW62
a wee bit dramatic... but i do like it... swell :)
Very dramatic and sad. I could picture the whole frightening scene. Well done
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7/22/2025 1:49:44 PM # 1.0.0
You didn't write this. This poem was written by me a little differently in my teenage years. You did it no justice. My younger sister entered it to be published but used her name instead, I was plagiarized. Changing a few words does not make it yours. People get their belongings stolen from their home and call the police, but it's even worse when someone steals your words. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Edit and credit to Toni L. because I worked too hard on this to have it ripped away.
I remember reading this back in Grammar school I thought it was beautiful. I memorized it. & This is not it. Nice try.
I'm sure this is adapted from an old English folk song " the Butcher boy"
No I'm sorry Toni. U didn't write this poem. U might of had a twist on this famous poem when u were in love in your teens and had your heart broke. But I guarentee u didn't write this. Because my X girl in her teens wrote this same poem with her own twistš¤£