I Died Before My Birth! Comments

fantastic your metaphysical thought; I like it........grow up more in your level; god bless you O bangalee

You are dead before your birth~ tremendous mysterious

spiritual though comes through the death of desire before the actual death~ nice functioning your thought provoking poem

it's a brilliant spiritual poem; your are bessings of true God.

I went to fire. Fire asked me, " Do you know I'm alive? " I went to the storm. Storm asked me, " Do you know I'm alive? " I went to nights. Nights asked me, " Do you know we're alive? " this poem is very m uch mystical in its own way. your poetic imagination is beyond compare dear Mahtab. tony

Nucleus Orbits Encircling Atoms behold everything alive solid real is but the vibration rate dance of elections in nucleus orbits encircling atoms Inspired by the poem 'I Died Before My Birth! ' by the poet MAHTAB BANGALEE. Dedicated to the poet MAHTAB BANGALEE.

everything alive solid real, is but the vibration rate dance of elections, in nucleus orbits encircling atoms

I went to the water. Water asked me, " Do you know I'm alive? " I went to the air. Air asked me, " Do you know I'm alive? " I went to fire. Fire asked me, " Do you know I'm alive? " I went to the storm. Storm asked me, " Do you know I'm alive? " I went to nights. Nights asked me, " Do you know we're alive? " Wonderful poem my dear Mahtab. lovely. tony

Very true we live unknowingly what living means. That question should be everybody's question.

What a great write...

Very lovely and feelings Full poem as if it were a canvas of any painter....Love Much

Nice poem Mahtab.10/10

True man is born with no knowledge of mankind.

We live while we breathe. As long as our heart beats. As long as we love and are loved. Thanks for sharing.10+++

Lovely write my dear friend. Saw your comment on my poem 'Rivers of Tears' and was moved. I like this because even if we hate to die, we forget it is important to die to live. Only in death can we live. Keep up the Gospel.

Extraordinary piece of poetry......thanks///

A thoughtful poem with very interesting presentation. It one wonders what makes us alive? Your view certainly is a great answer. Thanks for sharing.

This is quite unique

Lovely piece. I enjoyed throughout. Thank u. anjandev roy.

Great poem. Everything which is the part of this creation has a heart that beats and feels. Philosophical treat. But I did not find myself! Are you dead? I shouted on myself.