Thursday, December 24, 2015

I Die Everyday Comments

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She is ever before me
Like the sky
Yet I cannot tell her how I feel
Is this not suffering
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Yine Fai
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Terry Dawson 05 January 2016

How intreguing! There is an impediment I guess. Let no man put asunder, perhaps?

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 December 2015

I die everyday From the fire of desire From the sting of unspoken words Is this not suffering Is this not pain? longing, desire, passion, love .. thank u. Tony

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G. Akanji Olaniyi 25 December 2015

Climb the mountain......swim the ocean......trek the distance.......just break the fear barrier, , , , ,

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Terry Craddock 24 December 2015

'She is ever before me Like the sky Yet I cannot tell her how I feel Is this not suffering Is this not pain? ' beautiful, when words will not come say it with flowers cholates jewellery, whatever she likes, or write feelings

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Manonton Dalan 24 December 2015

go tell and be done with....

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