Tuesday, November 7, 2017

I Die Bit By Bit Comments

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I die bit by bit every day
Since I'm leaving
The firmament is black
The penumbras of the lampshade
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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2017

The lampshade are very dark tonight and you feel that you die bit by bit everyday. This is really very thought provoking poem. During birth we appear through human bodies and others welcome us and during death we disappear and many say goodbye to us. A brilliant poem is beautifully presented....10

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