I Didn'T Realize Comments

I guess I'm like the one who is sitting on the cloud daydreaming my life away. Lovely poem Ernestine, love Andrew x

Intuiging slice of the etheral abstract..I like this a lot, young lady...You always know how to wet our poetic appetites, dont'cha now! ? ...Hell, mines in salavation right now! ~ ~ ~

Started out thinking it was like a Mom telling a child it's time to get a life and than the ending has me in stiches....This one captivated me and is ever so clever..~~marci.xo~~ :)

This is really interesting Ernestine, like a memory and when you wake up from your sleep you realise that they have gone..really thought provoking Take care Love duncan X

Hey Ernestine a clever piece of work here....well done

I like the prose-flavoured style here, Ernestine. A thought-provoking read. Well done! Love Dan xxxxxx

Fantastic, truely like this, answering the question as to why and giving the answer