Monday, January 27, 2020

I Didn't Leave You Comments

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I didn't leave you
I had to go
but I'm right here
I just want you to know
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Aqua Flower
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Terry Craddock 18 November 2020

I wrote the poem 'Devastating Break Up Heartbreak Blues', inspired by the poem 'I Didn't Leave You', by the poetess Aqua Flower and dedicated to the poetess Aqua Flower.

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Terry Craddock 18 November 2020

I wrote the split images 'Your Sick With Deadly Coronavirus Blues Flu', 'Lost In Bad Vibe Blues Keys Play Happy Memories', 'Stop Playing Defeating Stuck In Rut Blues Notes', 'Make A Habit Of Playing Good Vibe Blues', 'Replacing Failure Rut Blues Keys Destructive Notes', 'Dirge Blues To Recipe Happy You' and 'Expelled Chill Blues Became Beautiful You', inspired by the poem 'I Didn't Leave You', by the poetess Aqua Flower and dedicated to the poetess Aqua Flower.

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Terry Craddock 18 November 2020

I wrote the poem 'Sorrow Pain Meet In Bitter Heartache Blues', inspired by the poem 'I Didn't Leave You', by the poetess Aqua Flower and dedicated to the poetess Aqua Flower.

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Terry Craddock 18 November 2020

No Light No Sunshine Blues sometimes people must go because like a precious flower they are dying withering inside with the sorrow of no light no sunshine the pain of no water drying up from within a suffocating death no light no sunshine flowers are not meant to wither die in darkness people often leave not because they want to go but because they cannot stay Inspired by the poem 'I Didn't Leave You' by the poet Aqua Flower. Dedicated to the poet Aqua Flower.

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Terry Craddock 18 November 2020

No Self Respect Self Confidence Blues without self respect self esteem self confidence how can a person develop inherent precious value attain confidence healthy feel good happiness? Inspired by the poem 'I Didn't Leave You' by the poet Aqua Flower. Dedicated to the poet Aqua Flower.

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Terry Craddock 18 November 2020

Pain Sorrow Are Blues Dirge Keys the sorrow and pain of a break up especially a break up that originated in a deep pure soul consuming love is a pain I would not wish on anyone sorrow pain are soul destroyers sorrow pain eat self esteem self worth sorrow pain eat self respect self belief Inspired by the poem 'I Didn't Leave You' by the poet Aqua Flower. Dedicated to the poet Aqua Flower.

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Terry Craddock 06 November 2020

The sorrow and pain of a break up, especially a break up that originated in a deep pure soul consuming love, is a pain I would not wish on anyone. Sometimes people must go, because like a flower, they are dying withering inside, with the sorrow of no light no sunshine, the pain of no water drying up from within. People often leave, not because they want to go, but because they cannot stay.

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Aqua Flower 15 November 2020

Yes sometimes it is the lesser pain to endure. Thank you for reading Terry.

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Khairul Ahsan 17 October 2020

I can understand whom the poem is addressed to. I can also feel the pain you suffered while writing this poem. Best wishes, dear poet! Certainly your last two lines will come true one day.

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Aqua Flower 20 October 2020

Very few understand the story. Thank you for your comment and sympathy. Many a poems are written during emotional pain.

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Amir Marandi 30 January 2020

Very emotional poem which is not foreign to me.

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Aqua Flower 31 January 2020

Thank you dear poet for visiting a sad one! Sharing feelings through words is the essence of poetry!

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Rini Shibu 27 January 2020

Emotional are well penned, love never dies

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Aqua Flower 07 November 2020

Thank you for your comment Rini! This one was very emotional for me to write.

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