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I Like the vexed complexity of the poem specificaly reading through the lines, even though painful, i love its deepest massage, word!

You are a very good poetress, a lot better than me. I only write stupid stuff. Maybe when I grow up I can be as good.

Now that is a mature and meaningful poem. So happy to find a poet with a head on her shoulders. Read mine -I Cannot Return - Adeline

Really wonderful work. Very emotional. Well written

Thanks for sharing dear, nice work