Thursday, July 10, 2008

I Didn'T Ask Comments

Rating: 3.0

Darkness fall into this world,
As I pace the room as an animal caged,
The moonlight flows into the iron bars,
and with the moon rising my desire increases.
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Jinx Natta
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Jane Moon 18 June 2009

How evocative of the plight of the wolf, born to be filled with pride and free. For whatever reason, Man fears the wolf and traps and tortures. This poem says it well. (But misspellings and carelessness make the poem less effective than it could be.)

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