I Did Wept Comments

A good poem using images to express your feelings.

A very deep one this...well written..thank you

wow.............. nyc piece of work...

Very eloquent. Memorable lines.abound. You paint sadness very effectively, but one must be sorry for your tears. Kind regards, Sandra

Sounds like deep depression ran uncontrolled.The description was superb.A well penned piece.keep coming Asif!

quite expressive and misty...thanks for sharing 10

Beautifully penned with apt, striking words......10

Nice poem sir...as always rich in intensity. Thanks.

wow, asif this is very rich text a masterpiece 'Rusted heart once was gold Eyes thus faded aging old' i loved it +++++++10 and A+ regards anju

always remember that wonuded soul can be cured with the balm of love and care. it will not last forever.

Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem reflecting your passionate display of your wisdom. Best wishes, melvin