Wednesday, April 18, 2018

I Did Not Know Comments

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for Baharak, Spring 2018

I did not know how young you are
inside, where growth happens slowly,
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Daniel Brick
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Nosheen Irfan 30 April 2018

A deep, delightful n philosophical picture of spring. A season of growth n rebirth, filling the heart with joy n gratitude. A rejuvenating experience to read this poem.

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Bharati Nayak 24 April 2018

I did not know how friendly you are until I saw you standing under a cypress tree on which three owls perched and watched you intently. The middle one hopped closer to you and settled deeper into his niche of awareness. The next one, the largest, preened his black feathers flecked with gold and opened wide his huge wingspan. The last one pretended to be asleep but he opened his eyes often to ascertain your presence. And then he rested. - - - - - - - Absolutely beautiful ! !

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Bharati Nayak 18 April 2018

Wow- - Such lovely images of Spring - - - -young, beautiful, friendly and compassionate- -Nature is at ease, full of wisdom, creation happens inside at natural pace and deep love for our world- - our place of residence and hope.Let me quote a few lines- - -Had your grief made him see the world for what it is? Our place of residence and hope. Our era of perception and love. Our gradual knowledge of who we are and a wild, universal gratitude that sweeps us to JOY

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