Thursday, January 1, 2004

I Desire Comments

Rating: 3.3

I want to have the extremes of your Love,
See, how silly am I, wishing for unachievable.

I don't care if you maltreat me or promise to unveil your beauty,
I just want something unbearable to test my fortitude
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Allama Muhammad Iqbal
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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 May 2022

Execellent start by the great Poet Iqbal, in reality he knows too well what is possible and which not. I have enjoyed tremendously of his great knowledge. True fsacinating read

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 May 2022

Powerful poem betwixt passionate love and obeying God, between meeting his Beauty in Paradise or seeing the Light. He is a Great Poet from Pakistan.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 May 2021

I don't care if you maltreat me... what a strong determination! An admirable composition.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 May 2021

True enjoyable poem, magnificently rendered and powerfully worded, with humor and much care. Most deserving poem of the great poet Allama Muhammad Iqbal chosen as The Classic Poem Of The Day

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 May 2021

A powerful poem between passionate love and God, between meeting his Beauty in Paradise or seeing the Light. Great poem from a Great Poet!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 May 2021

Congratulations being chosen as the Classic Poem Of The Day. A powerful poem

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Harindhar Reddy 01 May 2020

I wonder if poet could realize his desire to have meeting with God! But time goes it took the poet with it!

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paul amrod 01 May 2020

This describes passion with its unbelievable power through seduction to rapture a man into helplessness.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 May 2020

I disclosed the secret in public, I need to be punished for being so rude.///great introspective utterance, in true heart there is no fear of helI; the true one is not greed for heaven; but seeks true light of god for all

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 01 May 2020

It would be better to add the actual ghazal in Urdu(Roman or Nastaliq) .

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Ravi Kopra 01 May 2020

Poemhunter, please post here the original poem in Urdu. Or is it the original poem in English?

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 May 2019

Let the God fearing people be dwelling in the paradise, For, instead I want to be face to face with you. ///// greatest brave heartiest utterance Yeah; O God really I, the love don't want your heaven, don't want the shadow of Your highest throne Yeah; still I'm waiting here, in this inn with this beggarly bin to see YOUR nonseenable undiscovered LIGHT! O' God, let me see YOU, let me see YOUR TRUTH!

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Julia Luber 01 May 2019

Interesting poem about the line between being upfront and being rude. Behind it though lulls an appreciation for beauty which overrides both social concerns.

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Douglas Scotney 01 May 2019

True, meaningful and creative, but he's been dead these 80 years Abdulrauf

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Abdulrauf Muhammad 01 May 2019

what a fascinating poetry, i your poem is really meaningful and creative, the emotional expression is really touching, can you please check out my poem and rate it, " I seek a friend" it might be of your interest. thank you.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 01 May 2019

A emotional flow with wonderful intensity in pursuit of a cherished glimpse of the beauty. A great life song crafted by a master craftsman.

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Savita Tyagi 01 May 2019

Lovely poem of spiritual longing. This genera of poetry Expressed from heart of saints Sufi or devotional is so wonderful to trad if one can read in its original language. This translation is beautiful thanks for doing it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 May 2019

To unveil your beauty! ! ! Longing for your love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 May 2019

So touchingly expressed. Beautiful poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 May 2019

I want to have the extremes of your Love, See, how silly am I, wishing for unachievable. love and its problems.. desire, wishes of human kind. tony

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Allama Muhammad Iqbal

Allama Muhammad Iqbal

Sialkot / British India
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