Thursday, March 12, 2009

I Deserve To Live Too Comments

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The wild days of mercurial surge
The tranquil nights of deep hypnosis
The gloomy fall of animated hues
The blooming spring of divine hopes
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Dr Kamran Haider Bukhari
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Naidz Ladia 12 March 2009

never surrender to the consequences that are existing...dont let failures be the hindrance of every success....fight for every trials...you must know that you should live too...cheers to this poem of yours...it is nicely written.. naizz

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Catrina Heart 12 March 2009

We all deserve to live for we have received God's gift and that is life. We are only human being made not perfect to live in this world, for God has given us free will and intellect...........the right of choice between what is right and what is wrong....to do good and to avoid evil....Unfortunately, even with these special gifts people still loss on their journey their right path because, they always use their instincts in decision making in order to survive rather than the intelligence they have..............nice composition sir...........10+++

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Joseph Poewhit 12 March 2009

Poem goes into deep mediative thoughts about life's existence and roads of thoughts

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