I deserve nothing good.
Not even a good homely food
not even a bed coffee
not even some one to care me when I am sick
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thomas.....ur poem is getting closer rythms.......it's more contained...but the expressions are complete........ur emotions are powerfully contained.......ur line after my mother...' was really strong.....
great expression of how you felt but you have to know you deserve much more....