Saturday, September 17, 2005

I Deserve Nothing Good Comments

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I deserve nothing good.
Not even a good homely food
not even a bed coffee
not even some one to care me when I am sick
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Thomas Viruvelil
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Angelique' Rockwell 21 November 2005

great expression of how you felt but you have to know you deserve much more....

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Bijoy Philip 17 September 2005

thomas.....ur poem is getting closer rythms.......it's more contained...but the expressions are complete........ur emotions are powerfully contained.......ur line after my mother...' was really strong.....

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Thomas Viruvelil

Thomas Viruvelil

Cochin, Kerala state, India
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