I Deny! Comments
The wine of your love has left me baffled
Your poison of betrayal has left me crippled
O God! why do I have to go through this pain
I deny life's coercion into which I'am circled.
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The torture can be viewed in multiple dimensions! Betrayal is brilliantly portrayed here. To my favourite!
Pains and torture of women are brilliantly depicted in your poetry!
This is a great four liner that depicts the appeal of love as an addiction and the pain that accompanies it when it ends in betrayal. Thanks for sharing your thoughts so poetically.
A compelling and creative cry that is both hurtful and helpful. Short but significant!
It is part and parcel of life, pain, sorrow, happiness all come to us in combo pack without choices.....Nice poem.
Life, love and pain! But, let us stand up strong for the works of the truth. Nice works.
A touching poem, much has bee said by the poetess in just only four lines.
What comes from the heart touches the heart. well expressed.
Power message concerning one's own inability or willingness to recognize the danger in what appears to be true love. great job.
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7/28/2025 2:48:03 PM # 1.0.0
Heart touching.Beautiful crafting.