Sunday, October 22, 2006

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Blood dripping down my lip
oh my god i must have flipped
the wolf inside came out
grief.. bottled inside, i have to shout
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Adryan Bates
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Slick Sorathiya 08 February 2007

Lol i can just imagine what your trying to describe, reminds me of a poem I wrote. Dude Dark poetry is the best keep it up, As Mary Nagy says create Love poems but one thing I have to advise keep it dark lol, your other poems are also really good.

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Mary Nagy 12 November 2006

I see a dark theme with your work. Interesting. I would love to see you write something about love or pleasures. I would bet you could do very well with that area of emotions too. Great work. Sincerely, Mary

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