Friday, March 24, 2006

I Dare To Dream! Comments

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The agony deep inside me fumes,
as darkness around me looms.
My world is crumbled as it seems,
and yet I dare to dream.
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joana bluementhal
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Ron Flowers 14 May 2008

A wonderful expression of hope. A message that says, 'never give up.' I love it.

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Sophia White 27 March 2006

A lovely poem. Wonderful allusion about crossing the streams.

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Brian Dorn 24 March 2006

Beautiful poem, joana... very inspiring! Keep writing! Brian

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joana bluementhal

joana bluementhal

kanpur, India
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