Sunday, October 22, 2017

I Dare To Defy Fact Comments

Rating: 4.7

We fell in love too early it seemed,
The odds were against us.
The world; cruel and mean,
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Simon Lawson
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Chinedu Dike 03 January 2016

An insightful depiction of the strains and pressures which are brought to bear on commuter or long distance relationships, well articulated and nicely penned in poetic diction with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Sabrina. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kim Barney 05 December 2015

Very hopeful ending to your poem, Sabrina. Here's hoping your love works out!

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Souren Mondal 05 December 2015

A very well written poem Sabrina. Thank you for sharing..

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Simon Lawson 05 December 2015

Thanks :)

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