Thursday, February 21, 2008

I Danced My Life Away Comments

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I saw the faces of the moon...
the yawns of the stars at night.
The moon is wilder every minute
as I danced my life away.
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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring
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Emily Oldham 12 September 2008

Lovely description...utter despair... love it! Thanks Athena xxx

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Sreelekha Premjit 12 March 2008

I love the way despair is conveyed in the poem. tnx for sharing.

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