Thursday, November 21, 2013

I'D Search For You Comments

Rating: 4.3

If I could walk backwards into the night
Down dark and winding roads of pale moonlight
I’d search for you
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Beach Girl
COMMENTS
Beach Girl 02 October 2019

Thank you Dr. Dike, I appreciate your kind words.

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Chinedu Dike 25 September 2019

Beautiful love poem well articulated and nicely brought forth from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 August 2019

If I could fly beyond the earth's blue sky From star to star I’d step, gazing from on high For views of you.. desire expressed so wonderfully well.. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Beach Girl 02 October 2019

Thank you so much Dr. Tony

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C F 08 January 2019

I read some of your poems and this is my favorite so far, keep writing, will look forward to reading more from you. Thanks for sharing.

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Sochukwu Ivye 28 October 2017

I just noticed something: the unique rhyme scheme. O this earns a '10' from me, please.

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Sochukwu Ivye 28 October 2017

Simply awesome, dear poet. Keep up the virtue.

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Bri Edwards 30 May 2017

ok! as i said two years ago, .......this is GREAT! ! ! ! ! it is going into my/our June 2017 showcase. the other female poets...and some male ones also.........will/should love it! thanks. bri :)

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Bharati Nayak 17 October 2016

If I could walk backwards into the night Down dark and winding roads of pale moonlight I’d search for you- - - - - - - - A very lovely poem yearning for some one you love.Enjoyed reading.

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Fog Runner 13 January 2016

Optimistic, feminine, and spiffy. Something is charming me here, and I keep coming back to suckle.

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Shahin Latif 26 November 2015

Excellent work. So romantic poem. I love it. Thank you so much dearest poet Beach Girl.

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Perry Biggerstaff 13 May 2015

You have done it again....bravo.

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Amitava Sur 17 April 2015

A beautifully written poem with intense love.

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Darlene Walsh 14 April 2015

A wonderful love poem, I enjoyed reading it. Darla :)

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Bri Edwards 12 April 2015

WOW! not only did i find one i hadn't commented on, but i found this FANTASTIC POEM. the only thing 'wrong' with it is that it's a 'love poem'. ugh! ! but such a wonderfully written one that it zooooomss to MyPoemList. I love the flow, the relatively short third lines AND that they each end in “you”. (of course you ARE referring to ME, but we needn’t tell everyone!) I do worry about a person walking BACKWARDS into the night; isn’t that just ASKING for a fall? ? the idea of turning back time by spinning “the earth back round the sun” is, to me, unique and fun. very clever. no typos, good rhyming; it has it all. too bad you had to mention “love”. ugh! and I think I’ll share it with at least one PH friend. and it would make a great addition to one of my PH showcases. think about it. bri :)

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Susan Lacovara 22 March 2014

That we would endlessly circle back to the place of perfect love....Such a simplistic approach that spoke volumes....exquisitely written. Applause and PEACE...

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Ahmed Abomahfouz 13 March 2014

in fact the poem is beautiful, it forced me to comment (i am affected) and to vote for it

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Chuy Amante 08 March 2014

Yeah! Tears and joy, all wrapped is this delighter! Keep them coming!

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C. P. Sharma 18 December 2013

Beautiful penning on love. The heart out poured.

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James Mclain 02 December 2013

The beach for me like the sea. Warm waves that clean your feet. Pulled back in, washed up again there along the shore...iip

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Khairul Ahsan 28 November 2013

It's a sweet, romantic poem, particularly the last stanza. Really beautiful!

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