I'D Pull Down Heaven And Wrap You In The Milky Way Comments
I'd pull down heaven and wrap you in the Milky Way If I could,
For you are the sun, the moon, and the stars to me.
If I could, I'd roll the ocean back to lay Atlantis dry beneath your feet,
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Wonderful proof that romance is alive and well in the fine poems of William Jackson. Kind regards, Sandra
The line alone is enough of a sigh.........then the rest of this write is one of pure love and passion. Melts the heart of even the coldest.
The sun and the moon and the stars...oh how I love that line. and have said it many times myself. A very strong love indeed...very beautiful poem! Hugs, Dee
A fine love song. The long lines are very muscular, but the images are tender, indeed.
A beautifully enduring love poem you have here William, I see a couplet form in the poem but it could be clearer if you defined the lines slightly more imo. This love you describe is the best love of all...eternal and completely open and true. Smiling at you, Tai
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7/20/2025 8:24:39 AM # 1.0.0
now that is love. great piece. -Tailor