Thursday, March 11, 2010

I'D Never Seen Us In Love Comments

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If I had ever tried to run before I must be sprinting now
I never wanted to find any of this
I had never decided to start looking
If I had ever been hurting before I must be screaming now
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Rachel BaByBeAr Anderson
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Paul Hansford 22 March 2010

A well-structured poem (I like the refrain 'If I had... I must be...') and clearly heart-felt.

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