Tuesday, August 18, 2015

I'D Give You Gold Comments

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I'd give you gold
If I thought it would make it easier
To keep you from the next mountain's goldrush
To hold you from the herds of dreams
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Susan Lacovara
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Darlene Walsh 25 August 2015

A very thoughtful and sad poem. There are many reasons for a lost love. Some people are never satisfied with the good that they already have. They need more, more of what really does not bring happiness. But for some reason they still want it, even if it means loosing the good already in their life.

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Kelly Kurt 19 August 2015

I'd have given diamonds at one point in time. I don't remember that time anymore.: -(

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Sandra Feldman 18 August 2015

Love nostalgia with a golden touch. Well done.

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