Monday, January 21, 2008

I'D Drink A Bottle Of Your Tears Comments

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I’d drink a bottle of your tears
and eat a pound of your pain
to take away what never should have been yours
in the dead of night I will wrap them up
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Jurietta Duraan 15 March 2008

This is a stunnig poem.... Ric S Bastasa refers to the heart in the desert like a dried-up raisin... this brings that to mind... read some of his poems too. You will enjoy them. Well done. Yuri xxx

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Mary Gordley 21 January 2008

What lovely thoughts in a poem that epitomizes empathy.

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