Sunday, April 27, 2014

I'D Be Alone Comments

Rating: 2.8

Listening to Mapei's
“Don't Wait”
the lyrics
were shaped
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Nika McGuin
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Valsa George 28 May 2014

A poem of hope, expectation and an indication that a long standing tie is about to develop! A cool breeze wafting into your life with the soft murmer of l...o...v...e..! Best of luck! ! Enjoyed!

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Daniel Brick 28 April 2014

Your poem is an act of friendship, one of the preliminary acts of commitment that make a friendship strong enough to withstand things that could destroy it. It is also an act of hope, not the passive hope that expects things will turn out right but an active hope that imagines things ARE right. Hamlet says succinctly, THE READINESS IS ALL. Well, it's obvious from this poem you are ready for this friendship to flourish, and that certainty makes this poem glow with good will for you, the addressee, me and everyone else who reads it.

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