Monday, August 18, 2008

I Cry Until My Tears Become Dry Comments

Rating: 2.9

When my love left me
after all so long
I could only begin to see
how love could go so wrong
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Allen Steble The Philosophical Poet
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Swimming in the sea of sadness with eyes as dry as a desert. Well written.

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Jan Fuentez 07 January 2009

Moving and realistic. I know the pain.

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Nichola Okoro 07 January 2009

D poem i cry is very splendid.I think Allen would make a good song writer.You know i like moving poems and it appeals to me.Take care Allen.

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Viola Grey 18 August 2008

this really is enough to break a heart...raw emotions shared beautifully...great write

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