Saturday, June 30, 2012

I Cry Comments

Rating: 5.0

when would war ends?
When would foes turn to friends?
With what've seen, i cry
when would tears never flow?
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James T. Abel Adesitimi
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tanks alot i wish to have u as frnd on facebook.whats ur username?

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karen thanks alot.i wish to have u as friend on facebook. Whats ur username?

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interesting and good

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Karen Sinclair 30 June 2012

A really lovely piece which has such great potential but (and i am being honest) i hope you dont mind... How you have laid out this write makes it difficult (for me) to read.. Which is a shame as i love the actual words and pleading sentiment. Great potential... i really hope you do not mind my thoughts and please remember that they are just my opinion... thank you.. karen

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