Wednesday, January 19, 2011

I Cry Comments

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I cry when am happy,
i cry when am shy
even when am high i cry,
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Pranab K Chakraborty 26 January 2011

Writing is undoubtedly a good poem by its poetic form. Lucid but very grammatic in its constructional beauty. Secondly, my opinion, don't try to be a crying machine. Earth is a place where criers are always being dominated and exploited from their all sort of rights. So, practice anger within and fire yourself up where burning is necessary in your surroundings. (Just a fun, don't take it seriously.) Good writing. Thank you. Regards, pranab 10 (my vote but uncountable I think)

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