I Crave Your Eyes, Your Laughter, Your Touch Comments
I crave your eyes, your laughter, your touch
I crave the smile of your eyes
the warmth of your breath
the scent of your eyelids
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poem has a smooth flow, and good choice of words, simple to read and understand, which i really like..... nice concept, well written...
What else is it, that you know are.. when the petals spread.. and those thorns are all around...iip
a delightful, evocative piece of work. I think the images you share are vibrant and flow like a river
Its a lovely piece. Each word expressing the helplessness of loving and wanting the loved one close to you. Great writing. With best wishes....
i love some of the lines in here, dialect of your eyes, tears of winter clouds, woman without her skin, very nicely done. the structure is quite traditional too, nice poem and keep writing =)
Beautifully shared moments of love, expressed with passion..The narration, is softly spoken...but the tone..screams passion.....Well penned
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7/19/2025 7:55:08 PM # 1.0.0
A nice poem written from the recesses of the heart. Keep it up and thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.