Monday, December 29, 2008

I Count The Frosts Comments

Rating: 5.0

Snowflakes are falling like a gift of white.
The classic landscape burns incessant, bright.
Old panes picture, literally, scores of frost.
No single note of music has been lost.
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Sandra Fowler
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Marieta Maglas 19 April 2010

Excellent as always Sandra, you have such beautiful poems. Best wishes, Mari

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 25 September 2009

beautiful and musical.....a pleasure to read your poems

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 15 June 2009

Just beautiful Sandra, you are in command of imagery and words setting senses reeling. What a joy to read.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 May 2009

Beautiful poem using nice imagery. 10+

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Kjxnhvkzdh Vnhcjfh 12 January 2009

that is really good! ! ! ! !

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Vaibhav Pandey 11 January 2009

it is just brilliant.

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Blue Eyes 07 January 2009

very nice descriptive language, well done.

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Andrew Blakemore 07 January 2009

Just lovely Sandra, the final line is brilliant, well done and thanks for the great comments. Best wishes, Andrew

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Nimal Dunuhinga 07 January 2009

Like a frostbite, this elegy would be remained in the solitary hearts forever, Sandra knows the warmth of snowflakes well.I count the Frosts is your Masterpiece?

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Original Unknown Girl 06 January 2009

Absolutely stunning Sandra. Not a word wasted in this cascade of snowflakes. I really enjoyed the rythmn and cadence to this piece, it could almost be sung. The final line is 'blinding'. Beautiful. Look forward to reading more of your work in 2009. Happy New Year to you too. HG: -) xx

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Alison Cassidy 05 January 2009

The subject of this beautiful poem is obviously very dear to you Sandra. Love the contrast between the 'scores of frost' in your 'classic landscape' and the warmth and conviviality of the second stanza. I do believe that this wonderful internet shows us how distances of space and time become irrelevant when hearts are open. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Aijaz Asif 05 January 2009

you count the frost like most people count the stars to keep the night of love filled moments going...you painted an exstremely beautiful picture here with colors of beautiful words and feelings here ma'am and i loved it...................thanks for sharing the marvellous piece of art with me and im sorry for myself that i read it very late, this beautiful jewel goes to my favorite list, many 10sssss for this beautiful and soul filling write rgds asif

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Raveendran . 03 January 2009

A very romantic frost, the classic landscape that I miss here; In the music that transgresses space, I see them flakes, the colours...

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Uriah Hamilton 31 December 2008

And I have chased my words in pursuit of knowledge of myself but I've followed your words for inspiration, kind poet. Uriah

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Bob Blackwell 31 December 2008

Sandra, I felt no cold just warmth in this poem and your closing words are oh so true. Best wishes for 2009 Bob

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Moushumi moushumi 31 December 2008

Hello, Very nice metaphor indeed. Happy New Year

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 31 December 2008

Its such a beautiful and refined poem that I cannot express in words. Winter is your true charm my dear friend Sandra! Its so romantic, almost classic, to remember old memories while counting the scores of frosts on old panes nearby the fireplace. Nostalgia is crystallized in this poem.

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Mary Naylor 31 December 2008

A short poem that overflows with feeling and meaning. The last line was such a delightful surprise for me. I didn't see it coming!

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Scott Austin 31 December 2008

“True poets give themselves away in words” they also paint beautiful pictures with them as well, like you have. Thank you for sharing your works with us. May peace and joy fill your heart each and everyday. Scott

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Chitra - 30 December 2008

sparkling wordscape laced with fine poetic expressions and an equally enchanting theme

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