I Count On Akhtar Jawad To Do So-Kelly Kurt Poem by Akhtar Jawad

I Count On Akhtar Jawad To Do So-Kelly Kurt

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Commenting on my poem, A Necklace of Pearls,
a great poet with a singular style,
Kelly Kurt, my thinker friend says.
"I could never write like this and so
I count on Akhtar Jawad to do so."
Kelly! Poets like you put life in the lifeless clay,
I am not a poet, I am a lover,
I love the clay fermented by you,
I make it a singing and dancing doll,
let me love this doll.
If I write something like that of a poem,
It's not poetry, just a magic of love,
transformed in words and lines,
Dear Friend! The bitter truths,
about the Creator and the Creatures,
when make me suffocating on the earth,
and my Dr. Heart prescribes beauty
as a medicine to restore my breaths
and to wash ugliness of human caricature,
I survey the earth and its beauty,
And I ask to myself,
"Is there anything more beautiful other than love?
And is there anything more lovely than a doll?
So I write poems on the beauty of a doll,
That's all I can do at this stage of life.
But when my breaths are restored,
and ugliness is decreased to a certain extent
I look into other matters,
and write some poems,
that make me sick once again,
a doll comes again in my dreams
and inspires me to write one more love poem."

I Count On Akhtar Jawad To Do So-Kelly Kurt
Sunday, January 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: doll
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 03 January 2016

Yes, yes Kelly Kurt is a very nice and wise poet and thinker friend of ours. Having love for the clay fermented by mind with interesting in commentaries of imagery that looks in to other matters and poems. A doll comes in dream and dances to sing once more. Very fantastic poem with nice attitudes is composed as a tribute.....10

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Ayman Parray 03 January 2016

A marvel of a poem, dear Akhtar sahib. To find a conversation between my two favorite poets in a single poem is the best thing ever. I like your reasons for writing poetry. Love is the best reason. I hope someday it can be my reason too. Thank you.

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Rajnish Manga 03 January 2016

Kelly Kurt and Akhtar Jawad Saheb have been two of the most precious pearls in the necklace of exquisite poetry on display at PH. Both are gifted, both have their unique styles and subjects which provide ultimate joy to the reader Is there anything more beautiful other than love? .....So I write poems on the beauty of a doll Thanks.

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Kelly Kurt 03 January 2016

My dear friend, Akhtar. You are the very essence of a poet. You write from a place of heart with words that no other can. I have never been a big fan of 'love poetry' before because most either don't see it as the true wonder it is or have not the ability to articulate it beyond the physical and or mundane. Of the hundreds of poets and poems that I scan here daily, I make it a point to read all of yours. Long life, happiness, peace and inspiration, Guru ji

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M Asim Nehal 02 September 2018

This is a fantastic poem, I consider this as tribute and mark of respect and mutual love and friendship between the two poets (Both are my favourite poets) . Janab Akhtar Sb. is real master of love poems.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 May 2017

The Creatures! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 09 January 2016

Verily, poems can be a good media of dialogue and conversation and this is a great example for....

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Savita Tyagi 04 January 2016

Two great writers and their mutual admiration! And we readers are the recipients of a beautiful poem. Salute to your love filled heart Akhtarji. Wish you a very happy new year with health, wealth, love, peace and joy.

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Khalida Bano Ali 03 January 2016

A wonderful write, i love this poem.....................................

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