Time went on slipping further
You too slipped away
In span of time.
Helplessly I watched you
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Briefly have conveyed the message strongly.........................very nice
Some poems I missed, now this lovable poem made me to a dream of reality Was it my love for you, Was not strong enough, Was it just one side affair, that time in my square was very shorter.
The beauty i see these line is uncomparable. Yes we hide our feelings for a longtime. by the time we are people the person slips away and we linger then for a life. Time went on slipping further You too slipped away In span of time.
Wow! ! ! ..such an excellent poem Geehta Madam...loved it like anything...Thanks.
I am reminded of the old proverb ' Strike while the iron is hot.' But then I have an opinion of my own, ' May be one may miss his bus to catch an aeroplane! ' The true cards of life, we do not know, and there lies the truth of life. A beautiful poem, as always, from you Ma'am.
When we are troubled our mind is working so much harder. Overthinking. We have given our all, often too much. Penned so beautifully. I thank you
A beautiful poem about lost love. Makes one nostalgic of one's young days.
I kept running inside a circle If I could break away the square I would have been in your arms my dear! ............................beautiful...
Love slips away - hold on to the hands firmly. Beautifully put in the poem.
Regret over a lost opportunity.....! To have loved and lost is better to have never loved at all! Great write! Enjoyed the flow of words and feelings!
Delayed Justice is Denied Justice, and when justice is denied one will have to face the consequences. Love is the supreme justice, a justice not only with the beloved only but a justice with ourselves as well...............10
Time went on slipping. Really sorry I could not hold hands of time as like as wings of sky. Amazing poem with wonderful imagery. Special poem definitely.
Great imagination with great composition on softer emotions......Geetha.......amazing write....10
Your heart touches us all like no other, again I read these words seeing future light shining.