Thursday, August 6, 2009

I Couldn'T Give It A Title Comments

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i wrote those lines about / for myself:

keep your smile..
stay tuned to your dream..
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HaZeM PaKKaR
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Wow. I can see why you couldn't give it a title. These are powerful words. These are all the things I wish I could have told myself when I was stuck in my own sad world. self when I was stuck in my own sad world. My favorite line is 'dance with the butterflys' I've done it before, only once, and not with too many butterflys, but it was still beautiful. I love the poem!

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Duh Huh 09 August 2009

Wise words, thought provoking poem. Take all from life that you can. I like it. Thank you for sharing your talent. :)

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