Monday, September 28, 2009

I Couldn'T Fulfill Her Strong Desire Comments

Rating: 5.0

One dark evening
I met a bare-footed little girl
Who carries a ragged doll
Along a narrow cobbled street.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 01 October 2009

This is a beautiful poem NImal. Your little girl with poems in her eyes reminds me some of the paupers that grace Charles Dickens work. Your poetic style though, is all your own and very moving; very moving indeed. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 28 September 2009

One of your most memorable poetic characters, this sad little girl with poems in her eyes. Beautiful, my friend.10/10 from, Sandra

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