I Could Spend My Days Comments

On a technical level, this is an interesting piece, with its use of near-rhyme (words/worlds, life/nice...) and the imagery of 'sketching our memories into tight ribbons in the dark' and 'carve myself a new heart.' On an emotional level, it may sound patronising to say you'll get over it, but it is (regrettably?) true. Well done for organising your emotions into a poem that is controlled but obviously deeply felt.