# I Could Not! Comments

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'Wish I could Even the divide, Of powerful rich and the dismal poor Light up every dejected daughter’s face When her parents come Visiting her place'……... The hurting honest painful words of an average indian young wife living in a 'status sensitive' joint family... wordings beautiful and touching...especially the lines quoted above...well done, Seema 10

sterling quality +10 love anju

I was moved by the poem and by the poet

amazingly great and inspiring write ma'am you surely did well composed the bitter truth of life.....10+++ thanks for sharing

Eloquent......painful......a truely piece of art seema! ..........10+++++ as always

ah! ! ! ! ! ! ! well thought out and well penned............keep writing!