Monday, January 30, 2012

I Could Not Sleep Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your room at first
near perfect dark,
you breathe in sleep.
Diffuse light blurs
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Danny Draper
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Walterrean Salley 27 March 2012

When sleepless, everything is game. You’ve done a good job here Danny.

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Karen Deeks 22 March 2012

The persistence of insomnia... Perfectly placed by wording and positioning. The sounds thoughts traumas and memories of lot loves and relatives all causing a mind kerfuffle. Bravo dear poet.. Karen

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Dave Walker 27 February 2012

Love it, really love it. A fantastic poem.

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Valerie Dohren 19 February 2012

Great poem Danny - definitely stirs the imagination.

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Danny Draper

Danny Draper

Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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