Tuesday, November 11, 2014

I Could Not Forget Her (Part-Ii) Comments

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I remembered her back as I was in her lap more,
She unexpectedly crossed the life boat and shore.
From her core of heart, fell pure affection for me
Still I wandered in path playing life I could not see.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Mahtab Bangalee 31 October 2018

Good teachings always recollect the good passed teachers and their name make inscribe in heart as solem inscription of epitaph /// nice series

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Allotey Abossey 18 June 2015

how much more could any one write to remember mum...God bless you

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Akhtar Jawad 18 November 2014

Beautiful Part II, you are amazing my friend!

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Bri Edwards 15 November 2014

a fine followup to part one. the only part i had 'real trouble with' was knowing if you meant cult or culture. i know you said cult, and that may be correct. in the u.s. cult often has a negative connotation and does not mean the same as culture. thanks again for the rhymes and for the story. i wonder if any poets ever write about their fathers. hmm? bri ;)

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Sallam Yassin 15 November 2014

beautiful is your love to mom and your words/ thanks to share

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Heather Wilkins 15 November 2014

a great tribute to mother I read # i and this is a lovely finish to a tribute to mother

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Ramesh Rai 14 November 2014

Blessings of mother always remain till last breath of life. A nice tribute to mother. Loved your ink. Regards.

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Valsa George 12 November 2014

A mother who asked her children not to cry over her departure and assured them that God would take care of them in her absence and reminding them never to deviate from the path of righteousness! A good poem!

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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