Sunday, November 9, 2014

I Could Not Forget Her (Part - I) Comments

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I was a child before sure sixty one years ago,
Mother's lap was pleasure I couldn't forgo.
She was dandling me, was feeding me often,
I remembered her now how did she soften.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Edward Kofi Louis 02 July 2020

Aging! ! I was a child before! ! Muse of mankind on earth; Life's journey. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 31 October 2018

suddenly I'm shocked in - One day in sudden did not know what happened, In my early teenage I lost her forever I saddened She was no more but at all I couldn't forget her, Her blessing through God, I achieved sure no fur. // excellent teacher, teachings

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Mark Heathcote 22 March 2015

I enjoyed your third stanza a lot thanks for share this lovely poem for your dear mother. Nice one.

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Heather Wilkins 03 December 2014

a lovely tribute to your mother enjoyed the read

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Akhtar Jawad 18 November 2014

Memories of a sweet mother and a tribute, a beautiful poem is it.

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Heather Wilkins 15 November 2014

a great tribute to a lovely mother there is no other like her good writing

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Valsa George 11 November 2014

A lovely tribute to a dear mother...! A mother's love, we remember often and cherish for ever in life! Her care and patience are unlimited! From infancy... through all stages of life she is our true guide and harbour! Losing her at a young age is something quite miserable! Enjoyed!

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Valsa George 11 November 2014

A lovely tribute to a dear mother...! A mother's love, we remember often and cherish for ever in life! Her care and patience are unlimited! From infancy... through all stages of life she is our true guide and harbour! Losing her at a young age is something quite miserable!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 10 November 2014

That's nice poem- How one can forget sun rise it is always fine and charming and attractive and unforgettable

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Marieta Maglas 10 November 2014

Excellent poem...enjoyed reading it..voted 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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