Monday, October 6, 2008

I Could Never Miss Your Love. Comments

Rating: 4.3

As I lay and write this poem
I think and wonder, about my so-called home
Why do you tease me..
With your love, comes a fee?
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Sylvi Hart
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Kesav Easwaran 20 November 2008

words frank and honest from a suffering heart...good matured write for your young age, Sylvia...liked this poem...a ten for you

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Hamed Pooyan 13 October 2008

hi, i think this poem of a girl in this age is very good! you tell a story that is main subject of any love in these days and i think that is good and real.

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Heather C 09 October 2008

Heey I really like your poems, they are very creative and you have a good way to let out all of your anger. Keep up the great work! : D

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Sylvi Hart

Sylvi Hart

Peterborough, ON
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