Sunday, November 10, 2013

I Could Lay In Your Embrace Comments

Rating: 4.8

I could lay in your embrace,
Day by night, night by day,
Letting time keep steady pace
As we watch the branches sway.
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Katerina Richmond
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Heather Wilkins 13 December 2013

a beautifully written poem to someone very special.

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Khairul Ahsan 13 November 2013

Oh, it's a sweet poem. 'Your kiss will stay in my thoughts, making me wait for another. It leaves my thoughts in knots, But I can call it a pleasureful bother.' Liked this stanza. If you have time, please read my poem 'You And Me' and 'Love Is' and offer your views on them.

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