I Could Hear..... Comments

in intensive care units, man fights for his survival, uncertainty, ....... a wonderful picture you portrayed in this poem

Slowly, slowly I was going deep, Hearing some flick sound of beep, May be doctor around checking the pulses,

Slowly, slowly I was going deep, Hearing some flick sound of beep,

Nose blocked with pipes and tapped, Hand also tied with needle and capped, All sort of medicines mustered in vanes,

Slowly, slowly I was going deep, Hearing some flick sound of beep, May be doctor around checking the pulses, Not enduring pain and trying to repulse,

Slowly, slowly I was going deep, Hearing some flick sound of beep, May be doctor around checking the pulses, Not enduring pain and trying to repulse

All youth and child scenes simply emerged, Wished all could happen without being caged////////10

i could hear and feel some movement....10

u can hear clearly....10

we can hear in dead night.....10

u cnfeel some movement..10

still some movement u cansee even if facig dead end....10

i could see some movement in the end...10

final time scene under pain....10

u candistinctly make thesound of foot steps....10

could hear it from distance....10

u cangently hear in the dead night time....10

anybody can hear steps in the night....10

death is for sure n to come...10

cry from distance over death....10