My nights at the disco now over,
My days of The Bump truly gone,
For age doesn't come by itself you know,
My feet have a mind of their own!
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I once was, the dancing diva, Now i'm the sofa Queen. Excellent sentences that splash a lot of colorful emotions.
this is abeautiful version I first saw AUDREY HEPBURN SING I COULD HAVE DANCED ALL NIGHT
LOL...brought a smile as I think that you've described myself perfectly! 5 stars from me!
Brings back memories! .. A pleasure to read! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++
Thank you so much Rebecca x So pleased you enjoyed reading my poem x
Ahh, Saturday Night Fever with John Travolta and The Bee Gees. Jayne, my friend Brian wants to win the lottery so that he can open up a disco. And I'll be his 1st customer. Even at 70, I feel reborn thanks to a hip replacement. Please read my IS THERE DANCING IN HEAVEN? Think you'll like it!
I know exactly how you feel I was very much a disco dancing man
A highly relatable experience is aptly portrayed in the poem. A beautiful creation....
Age does have a way with catching up to us, doesn't it? Very nice poem.
For this thoughtful and truthful poem - Top stars
I identify fully with the sentiments of the poem - how the dancing diva changes to a sofa queen with age
Heartiest Congratulations for the poem of the day. Lovely Poem Jayne Davies!
A beautiful depiction on how age affects our acts/ movements. Congratulations for a well deserved accolade.
Thank you everyone for your lovely comments. I'm well pleased to have made it to Poem Of The Day x
Every tide has an ebb is justified in your poem beautifully.
I liked the play on words Sofa Queen in reference to Dancing Queen the song.