Saturday, April 16, 2022

I Could Feel His Feeling Comments

Rating: 5.0

I could feel his feeling of gently slipping out
I could also feel him feeling it with alert vision
What a brave gentleman making an adieu moment..
A speechless performance that drowned me in tension
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Indira Renganathan
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 April 2022

Marvellous write........100

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 April 2022

Dear Indira Ma'm, So beautifully captured the pathos of a situation beyond our control. Sad but so very true.

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Nabakishore Dash 17 April 2022

Write about a mishap is very clear.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 16 April 2022

this poem has a light that has blinded me with joy Bravo!

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