Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, October 30, 2009

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I wish I could better explain the term sorrow
Visualize and see the bright future for tomorrow
Why not be self independent rather than to borrow?
Walk with me for some distance with resolve to grow
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 January 2022

It is happening at the right time...liked it sir

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Bharati Bhikhubhai 09 November 2009

I wish I could explain sorrow.....lovley poem....10

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Pitilosi Mdala 09 November 2009

you have explained and cleared everything in this poem, I could explain. Its worth to re-read

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Antonio Liao 08 November 2009

truth that sublime the infinite harmony of reality.....your a genuine poet, telling what’s the extreme of life....the joy, the pain, the suspense, even the fear that makes man uneasy to live.....so beautiful that you can even, explain......thank you for sharing...i love it...a 10 +++

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Yacov Mitchenko 08 November 2009

This is a poem about life and why many terrible things happen. You don't know why there is so much sorrow and lack of love. But the important thing is for the individual to remain reverent, to see the holy even amidst unfortunate events. I think that is the general theme here. Thank you. I appreciate the thoughtfulness.

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Rafique Farooqi 07 November 2009

I may make earnest attempt to feel its pulse What more I should have or feel for anything else? It has impact of attraction and magnetic pull Heart is filled with ……………………… I need not go on roof top and explain conduct What is happening around may be universal fact? Does this happen to all? I hide the face and feel very shy I shouldn’t question how it happened and w............................................................it is a beautiful message if we read again and again

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Louis Rams 04 November 2009

the last stanza says it all. when you leave it to the almighty and accept what he sends. a ten

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Pami Panchal 01 November 2009

I wish I could explain sorrow See the bright future for tomorrow

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Chetna Purohit 01 November 2009

Why not be self independent rather than to borrow Walk with me some distance with resolve to grow

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Ashley Paul 31 October 2009

One should have willingness to bow I wonder and think but don’t ask how? Things may develop and shape in its own way Seek blessings and hope for shining ray

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Ramesh T A 31 October 2009

Without love we are all not born and brought as of now sure! It's love making us what we are. Let us cherish love and live a better life as human beings! Nice message said in so many verses!

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Lady Grace 31 October 2009

i wish you could explain sorrow as you see it in her eyes to stop you from loneliness keeping in your heart.. i wish she could explain all the things that bothers inside you for it can comfort the surroundings and the environment within you... i wish i could see you in the best smile without jealousy and discomforts without hesitations and doubts wish a goodluck to BOTH....

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Catrina Heart 31 October 2009

Wish we could explain all things in just a simple way for everyone will be able to understand what's happening in our self, in our society, in our country and to the world............this is a great poem written and shared! ! ! 10++++++

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Radha Seth 30 October 2009

I wish I could explain sorrow See the bright future for tomorrow Why not be self independent rather than to borrow Walk with me some distance with resolve to grow

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Saroj Davde 30 October 2009

wish I could explain sorrow............................. See the bright future for tomorrow.wish i too could do it...lovely poem with purpose...10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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