I Could Be All Comments

You could be all in all the way you can...positive outlook, great composition...10

The cosmic unity is wonderfully portrayed in these lines.

Your poem is beautifully positive. I really like it.

This kind of positive feelings will surely help a healthy growth

this is deep! what a 10!

original in expression. good

the life force is every where.. and in every thing...and we as tiny reflections remain complete, each and all...good insightful write...10

you can be complete in whatever you are- even if its a tiny dropp - you could be all. great spiritual insight. Mamta

beautiful! loved the end the best!

absolutely great... Good work KRista

absolutely great... Good work KRista

your poem have made my day complete....its everything what i wish in life....a feeling trust has birth the eternity i do promise to my wife...thank you...God bless

You found the truth in one tiny dropp of water, lovely poem so true.

very meaningful! ....from a tiny drops of water comes the vast ocean... ... even as tiny drops of water...makes us whole ...from a tiny drops of water, life flourished...10++++ _maia_

lovely! ! ! ! ! a nice reminder that its the drops that make up the ocean thought provoking one --10 anjali