Thursday, March 15, 2018

I Confess Comments

Rating: 4.5

Lying on my bed just before sleeping
often I think something to write
but I sleep.
When awake I forget the thought.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Mj Lemon 16 April 2018

So well written and composed, Akhtar. You remind me that words and thoughts are often like those guests who arrive at large gatherings....and leave long before anyone (we!) has time to thank them. Great verse!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 March 2018

I confess, I am killer of love. My love is not true, Otherwise I would have left my bed and picked my pen.....brilliant poetic expression!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 March 2018

I am a killer of beautiful thoughts in the womb of my brain that could have born like a cute infant that could have grown in a popular poem like a sweet and sexy teenage girl who is grown to be loved.........confess you have made here about a teenage girl is real and nice. Beautiful poem with an unique write. Thank u Akhatarji.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 March 2018

This wonderful poem resonates for me. A unique thought that is put into a beautiful rendition of poetic words. Thoughts sometimes come so easily yet they slip away in an instant and leave you surreptitiously. You should have left your bed and picked your pen to capture those beautiful thoughts. Fascinating piece.10

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Rini Shibu 15 March 2018

I am a killer of thoughts in the womb of mind..I liked this line very much and the way you presented poem as a girl.+++10

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Khalida Bano Ali 15 March 2018

Having a look at the picture I thought it's a poem on school going girls, when I read it, I was amazed, a wonderful poem.

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