Dead sores and bruised toes
Up and down the silent shores
Cuts deep, drilled by poisonous foes
In and out of dungeons and dangerous holes
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enduring all the hardships of life you come home with love. excellent
What a journey of hardship and pain to survive it all with love still in your heart! Beautiful write!
Wonderful imagery, I could feel the desperation and what a beautiful ending. home. so sweet. great words used to paint a picture, is this a soldier's tale? it rings military strife...the return home. beautiful.
This is an interesting write! Quite a different style than most poems I have read. However, I love how livid and alive this poem seems. It is fairly touching, and I love it! Cassandra Jasmine
This poem is written with such beauty and courage. Through your poem I sense a boldness to want to come out and from under a life of darkness and into a life of light and wonder. Love is the greatest of all feelings and it conquers hate. Yes come with love! Thank you and Amen.
So heart touching poem................ nice rhyming.........
I agree with all my friends who have commented. never to stop is life indeed.