Friday, September 25, 2020

I Closed My Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

I closed my eyes
Yet I continue to see
Through the vastness of consciousness
My eyes are extended
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Kenneth Maswabi
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M Asim Nehal 25 September 2020

Excellent poem. Dreams are seen while body is asleep and mind is awake.5**

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Khairul Ahsan 25 September 2020

A poem of profound feelings, of deep love and companionship. A unique one. This poem gets full marks from me,5*****.

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Kenneth Maswabi

Kenneth Maswabi

Maun, Botswana
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