Monday, April 19, 2010

I Close My Eyes Comments

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I close my eyes like a good little boy at night in bed,
as I was told to do by my mother when she lived,
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David Ignatow
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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 June 2020

Idealistic life style and it's implementation. Well deserved modern poem of the day.

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Mark Heathcote 03 June 2020

We follow all the rules, play the odds and yet we still have our challenges and head-on collisions. A good poem!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 June 2020

Congratulation for being chosen second time as the modern poem of the poem of the day.

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 June 2020

I close my eyes like a good little boy.............as a standard boy I do all things required of me.........beautiful poem shared...... thanks for sharing

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Rajnish Manga 03 June 2019

That's a fascinating journey of a man to acquiring the qualities of a gentleman. Very sensible and appealing. Thanks and Congrats.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 June 2019

A beautifully conceived modern song of a modern man bound by the sense of punctuality and decorum. Well worth modern poem of the day.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 June 2019

A brilliant poem is so touchingly delineated. Thanks and congratulations for being chosen this poem as modern poem of the poem of the day.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 June 2019

'A citizen of sterling worth'! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Julia Luber 03 June 2019

Nice poem about the orderly comfort of habituation which feels familiar and comforting to all of us!

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 June 2019

A question that has no answer. Very nice poem. Thought provoking one.

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Alouwou Mandjah 03 June 2019

Indeed as a poet it's possible to live forever. Being selected as POD is a step toward your legacy, your immortality ...

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Dipak Adhya 03 June 2019

a good on.... To read...

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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 June 2019

One of the best poems by David Ignatow.....................

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 22 April 2015

A very profound question indeed at the end! Perhaps, the Lord is not a good book and time keeper. Great write!

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Kim Barney 22 April 2015

He lived to 83 years, nine months and ten days. That's not forever, but it's not bad. My mother only lived to be 44, and her mother only 61.

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Elaine Severin 29 March 2012

You did everything right. Why can't you live forever?

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Kim Barney 22 April 2015

Because he died in 1997.

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