Tuesday, October 1, 2013

I Choose To Rise Comments

Rating: 4.8

Today I choose to rise
like a strong mountain
Leaving my bed of demise
Never will I again be shaken
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JR Cuyam
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A B Faniki 02 February 2020

A inspiring piece. Great write my dear poet

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Sarah Shahzad 05 December 2019

Absolutely brilliant a fantastic piece of writing.. pls pleez do comment/ review/ write your thoughts on my to..

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Michael Walker 08 July 2019

A different and strong poem, with inspiring thoughts, 'For I was made in the image of greatness'. Marvellous.

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Michael Walker 11 July 2019

From what I have read so far, this is your best poem, in my opinion. 'I can do greater things'-this is the true spirit of a poet.

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Sochukwu Ivye 08 November 2017

A magnificient piece.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 August 2017

It is a poem of great determination having stunning and touching expression. Thanks for sharing.

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Ernest Makuakua 17 February 2017

A great piece and inspiring I learned a lot from my demise Now, I will not be shaken. Praise God! I found a way out. Fear not God says I will hold you with my hand of righteousness Powerful

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Diane Montemayor 25 December 2016

Dear Sir Jr, Very inspiring poem... Thank you for sharing....Would you like to read mine, RISE AGAIN PHILIPPINES. SIncerely, diane

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Akhtar Jawad 14 December 2016

A poem of great determination, wonderful......................................

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 December 2016

Nice good poem...10 rise and surprise as it has pirce from well conceived device

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Rose Kanana 02 September 2016

I like the the determination, choices made and the recognition that there is some supernatural power behind it

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Roxanne Dubarry 21 April 2016

I love your Christ centered poem, and share your Christian faith!

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Alade Abayomi Idris 16 April 2016

Intra-personal emancipation matters. Great work. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 December 2015

Life! ! Try to find a way out; for peace and love. Nice work.

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Clarence Prince 29 September 2015

Very nice! You can scream and shout loudly, and praise God that happiness found you! Yes, I like it! Well done, Jr Cuyam!

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Sranisha Francis 21 September 2015

I will not be shaken. Praise God! , like this words.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 12 September 2015

Exhilarating

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Stephen Pennell 22 July 2015

good poem about lifes up's and downs

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 08 July 2015

Highly inspiring indeed.Loved reading this poem.

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Bharati Nayak 04 July 2015

Short, beautiful and inspiring poem to rise like a mountain from the abyss of despair.Thanks for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 19 April 2015

A case of forces of the mind directing forces of fate well depicted in the poem. A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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