Today I choose to rise
like a strong mountain
Leaving my bed of demise
Never will I again be shaken
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Absolutely brilliant a fantastic piece of writing.. pls pleez do comment/ review/ write your thoughts on my to..
A different and strong poem, with inspiring thoughts, 'For I was made in the image of greatness'. Marvellous.
From what I have read so far, this is your best poem, in my opinion. 'I can do greater things'-this is the true spirit of a poet.
It is a poem of great determination having stunning and touching expression. Thanks for sharing.
A great piece and inspiring I learned a lot from my demise Now, I will not be shaken. Praise God! I found a way out. Fear not God says I will hold you with my hand of righteousness Powerful
Dear Sir Jr, Very inspiring poem... Thank you for sharing....Would you like to read mine, RISE AGAIN PHILIPPINES. SIncerely, diane
A poem of great determination, wonderful......................................
Nice good poem...10 rise and surprise as it has pirce from well conceived device
I like the the determination, choices made and the recognition that there is some supernatural power behind it
I love your Christ centered poem, and share your Christian faith!
Intra-personal emancipation matters. Great work. Thanks for sharing.
Life! ! Try to find a way out; for peace and love. Nice work.
Very nice! You can scream and shout loudly, and praise God that happiness found you! Yes, I like it! Well done, Jr Cuyam!
Short, beautiful and inspiring poem to rise like a mountain from the abyss of despair.Thanks for sharing.
A case of forces of the mind directing forces of fate well depicted in the poem. A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
A inspiring piece. Great write my dear poet